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One section in IELTS that may be really challenging is the Writing Section. In the previous test we have learned what criteria have to be met when doing the Writing Section. Today, we are going to learn how to meet those criteria and get a high marks simply by using basic template for writing. For the Writing Section scoring criteria, go to this link Criteria of IELTS Writing Section What To Do In Writing Task 1 In Writing Task 1, test takers should explain a graph, chart, or  picture and write 150 words in 20 minutes. The explanation has to cover an overview, key features, and other relevant information. There are several samples of layout for Writing Task 1, and of course one may prefer to use certain layout to another. But, we will only focus on the basic layout that is, as far as I concern, most commonly used. The layout itself is presented by some material books and I believe I see it some time on the internet. There may be some modifications necessary, but keep it for later. ...

We already had two writings checked and corrected. Now it's time to try writing Task 2 of the IELTS test. Look at this topic below. Wealth does not necessarily guaranty happiness. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Provide reasons for your answer. Include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience and write at least 250 words. First of all, remember that you have to include five points mentioned below: 1. Overview, consists of orientation derived from paraphrasing the original title For example: Being rich doesn't necessarily make someone live a happy life. Happiness can be defined by other things that are not related to wordly possession. But wealth is one factor that affects other definitions of happiness, especially when the world is becoming more and more materialistic. 2. State your basis of argument, in which you have to answer the answer regarding the exteng of your agreement or disagreement with proposed idea For example: I personally agree th...

This was written by Hana Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to inform you that I want to take several days off duty and I need your permission for this (1) . I would like to take 14 days off duty on this Summer from 01 June until 14 June 2017 and it would be very long holiday (2) . Because I must go to my village and it is very far away from here maybe it will be needed 2 days (3)  to get there by car. In addition, my little sister want to travel together with me at the end of her studies in High School. This is because of next week , she will celebrate of her graduation (4) . Therefore, I will give presents for my sister with travelling together (5)  in America for a week. Over the course of my off duties, one week before I go (6) , I will check several schedules about the pay bills of customers and I will bring my laptop. So, I could be covered my job then every day I will give you daily report by email (7) . For these reasons, I hope that you will (8)  give me for permission....

Topic: Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree. There is a belief that what is shown in media about celebrity will have negative impacts on kids . I partly disagree (...) of the coverage of media on celebrities will fully affected the children in negative way. First of all, media is one of nowadays society's basic needs, especially for people who want to get certain information. Whether they are in printed form  or in digital version, media provides the best solution in accessing informations . However, celebrities as part of society that are being presented in media in hope to become one of role models especially for growing kids , must be cautious because their behaviours are being shown in media. In most cases, celebrities that are also human beings have a slip in tongue or intentionally or accidentally do wrongdoings . These somehow can be prevented if society from the beginning doesn't...

Author's note: I used to have a graphic illustration for this writing. But it turns out that neither using such image nor providing a url directing to it is considered as  fair use , and I really want to make this blog as legal as possible, and to avoid having problems with copyright infringement. Please use the keyword of each first sentence of my writing to find the illustration from the website of the legal copyright holder. The diagram illustrates the growth of India’s population and China’s population in fifty years span from 2000 to 2050 based on the data of United Nation Population Division. Population in India has increasing trend, while population of China has fluctuating trend, which it will rise up until 2025 and then slowly decline until 2050. First of all, India’s population in 2000 was around one billion people and steadily rose to just below 1,2 billion in 2010. The number is predicted rising in constant pace such as just above 1,3 billion in 2020, 1,45 billion in y...

Author's note: I used to have a graphic illustration for this writing. But it turns out that neither using such image nor providing a url directing to it is considered as  fair use , and I really want to make this blog as legal as possible, and to avoid having problems with copyright infringement. Please use the keyword of each first sentence of my writing to find the illustration from the website of the legal copyright holder. The diagram illustrates the proportion of water usage for various aim s over the world in six different regions. The data consists of six regions which are North America, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia. The proportion of the use of water is presented in percentage. The graph has two trends, in which the pie charts could be categorized as the dominant or not dominant. According to the research's result , the majority of water used in Africa, South America, and two areas in Asia which consist of developing countries , is f...

Some experts say that parents need extra time to take care of their children in the early age because because teaching good manner to a child should be started in their early life. It is important for children to learn the difference of good and bad that the ability to distinguish them needs to be included in their education. Sometimes, parents use punishment to help them understand that good deeds will be rewarded while misconduct will have some consequences. Some people believe that the use of punishment in children moral education is necessary, but I personally disagree because punishment gives more negative impact on children. Punishment can be beneficial in some ways if parents know how to use it wisely for the sake of education. For example, if parents punish their children right after doing bad things, the children will tend to remember that certain actions or sayings will have the same consequences in the future. They will automatically will watch their manner because they real...